100 words slightly condensed

This weeks challenge is a bit of a challenge. Odd that.

Do a 21 word piece in the same rhythm as the following:

Remember remember the fifth of November
Gunpowder, treason and plot.
I see no reason why gunpowder, treason
Should ever be forgot…

using the phrase ‘…in winter we shiver …’ so I will attempt.

Drumroll please!

In summer we wither, in winter we shiver.
Such a sorry lot.
Hot, cold, comfortable never,
We have lost the plot.

Wiping sweat from brow. Bowing. Thank you! Thank you!

0 thoughts on “100 words slightly condensed

    • I haven’t read that many of the others yet, but every one that I have is great. I suspect those that put the effort in will all be successful 🙂


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